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 <br />Vision statement about current and past, not future <br /> <br /> <br />Energy, recycling missing <br /> <br /> <br />Need racial filter <br /> <br /> <br />No mention about 2 wards (2 & 3) <br /> <br /> <br />Graphics not legible and errors <br /> <br /> <br />Vision statement not clear; comments based on nothing <br /> <br /> <br />Typos and many errors on maps <br /> <br /> <br />Many omissions e.g. high-speed internet, etc. <br /> <br /> <br />Road Diet – remove graphics; have a summary; don’t be too specific <br /> <br /> <br />Introduction Section Comments <br />Frame equity and sustainability on p 3 <br /> <br />Community Profile <br />Olive is not addressed adequately; lack of history on Olive Boulevard, provide <br />more details on land use, issues <br />Additional details on all areas of the City; more balanced <br />Ensure that Ward 3 character etc. including history, housing stock etc. is <br />adequately profiled in comparison to other areas of the community. Include <br />rd <br />photographs of the 3 ward <br />p. 7 of document eliminate repetition about 1970s <br />p. 7 last paragraph seems to capture all the negative changes in the community <br />and seems out of context. Revise placement of paragraph <br />p. 13-14 font size is too small, make colors more distinguishable, add a key <br />Add a Census Tract map of the City <br />Ensure that all data is sourced <br /> <br />Community Outreach <br />p. 25 sMap include one representative map/graph; better describe the tool; <br />ensure the image is readable/larger; have one map that shows the tool but not <br />a representative map – include key points, include them in the appendix <br /> <br />Vision <br />The CPAC will revise the vision section, Rosalind will facilitate and provide <br />parameters. <br />2 <br /> <br /> <br />